Village in the Snow

Story
Mrs May told the children a story about village in the snow. This story's key point is magic key. When the children was talking, the magic key began to glow. "The magic key is working" said one child.
The magic took the children to the village in the snow. They jumped in the snow. They threw snowballs. They saw a little boy, and some big boys. Big boys pushed the little boy and ran away. The helped the little boy. The children threw snowballs at the big boys. The big boys ran away.
The little boy lived with his grandfather. Grandfather gave the children a drink . They told Grandfather about the snowball fight.
The magic key began to glow."It's time to go." The magic took the children home.
What an adventure.

My opinion
This story is wonderful. The children has kindness mind and brave. I respect the children. And I want to get magic key!!
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